Thursday, November 12, 2020

GMAT sentence correction - concept parallelism - level Hard


This is a tricky question. 70% of the students got this question wrong, when I presented this question in class, .

Lets understand the question first before going into the options.

Clue words:

1. Which- Check the antecedent...
2. and  - check for parallelism
3. comma(,) after dialects.. - What is the subject in the second clause 

Also

Did you observe ...
The increased popularity and availability ..........has....

Shouldn't it be... have???

No."The increased popularity and availability " is a compound word so its a single unit. hence has...

Meaning of the sentence


The increased popularity and availability has led to a decline of dialects. Because of the increased popularity and availability - language variations originated and perpetuating.....

You should have observed that originated and perpetuating are consequences of "increased popularity".. hence they have to be participles  and not verbs.  


Quick tip: A participle phrases modifies the main subject. You can say that the participle phrase is one long adjective. 

So we have to use participles here.

And - indicates parallelism. 
Hence Participle and participle is the parallel structure in this sentence.

Let us analyze each sentence 

Option A: Errors

1. No comma before which.
2. originate and perpetuated.  - Originate is a verb and perpetuated is a participle. It should be originating from.  


Option B: Error

originated is a past tense verb not a participle

Option C: Error

Originated is not a verb. It might look parallel to perpetuated. But it is not as perpetuated is a participle and "originated" is a verb. The participle form is "originating"


Option D: answer


Originating and perpetuated are the participles. Hence parallel

Option E: Error

Perpetuating is the participle form. not perpetuated. 


Hope you learnt about participles today.

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